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Volume VI, Number 1: January, 2004.
Copyright © 2004. All rights reserved by the respective authors.

Editors’ Choices • Commentary • Haiku Pages:  1, 2, 3, 4, 5 • Index of Poets


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       a salmon leaps
       Grandpa starts to sing
       with a brogue

                                      William Cullen, Jr.

This delightful poem makes me smile big every time I read it. The scene alone is enough to stir a reader’s imagination and evoke emotion. But for an audience that understands the technique of layered meaning in haiku, there is much more to be found beneath the surface.

The first line indicates the season. The word “leap” suggests either summer or autumn, when salmon make their journeys upstream from the sea. The element of cause and effect, often troublesome in haiku, is clearly present in this poem, inseparable from the poet’s moment of insight. Yet it is effective here. The core and strength of the haiku do not lie in the implication that a fish leaping caused Grandpa to burst into song, but rather in the discovery of intrinsic, unwritten reasons for this kind of reaction. Cullen uses the juxtaposition of two vibrant images to create an uplifting mood and invite readers to find significance on a deeper level. In my perception, the poem is about the poet’s familial relationship, humanity’s ancient relationship with salmon, and one man’s awareness of his inherent connection with nature.

Salmon are born in freshwater streams or rivers, but they spend part of their lives in the ocean. Swimming upstream from the sea, the adults return to their birthplace to spawn. Various species of this fish have been important to humans worldwide for a very long time. Cro-Magnon people etched pictures of them on tools and weapons 20,000 years ago. As major sources of food and sport, the salmon’s annual migrations were anticipated with great excitement in North America and Europe for centuries.

Salmon are famous for their fighting spirit and splendid leaps. They struggle furiously to escape the fisherman’s hook and will leap out of the water many times. With immense will and strength, they battle currents and rapids and even leap ten-foot-high waterfalls. It is no accident that their scientific name, Salmo salar, means “the leaper.”

Due to artificial dams and pollution by humans, their numbers have been declining since the early 1600s. In spite of overfishing, man-made obstacles, and other dangers, this mighty fish continues to survive and herald the season for those who know its ways. All of this fills Grandpa’s voice. He spills over with jubilation that this creature's life cycle continues as it has for his kindred for centuries of generations. Able to share this wonderful moment with someone dear to him, he starts to sing--and not merely to sing, but to sing in the brogue of his native Ireland, a sign of deep emotion.

As the New Year begins, The Heron’s Nest editors thank William Cullen Jr. for sharing his timely haiku of hope and renewal and of subtle homage to family and ancestral roots.



Ferris Gilli
January 2004


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